在冰冷雪地长大的心情....

小安

Endless Road


Every day my life passes with no meaning,
No joy, I dream, I think,
But only illusions it remains,
And just thoughts that will stay as fetus,
The core of reality fades my presence.
Dreaming with open eyes,
A protagonist finding no plot.
I try to escape, I run, look back,
Ending up always where I start.
A vicious circle.
Was I born?

璎珞

QUOTE Created By 小安 At 2006-4-8
[quote]QUOTE Created By 琳儿 At 2006-4-6
感觉上楼主是个多愁伤感的人啊～～
真的是GG吗？？ [M03]

真的是GG. 很象 小 [M34] [M34] 的一位GG.[/quote]

什么是很像小 [M34] [M34] 的样子？ [M01] [M01] 开始好奇了 [M14]

琳儿

QUOTE Created By 小安 At 2006-4-8
[quote]QUOTE Created By 琳儿 At 2006-4-6
感觉上楼主是个多愁伤感的人啊～～
真的是GG吗？？ [M03]

真的是GG. 很象 小 [M34] [M34] 的一位GG.[/quote]

楼主这句话是什么意思啊？
俺不明白啊～～～
[M20]

香草山

提个小要求好吗？

下次写英文诗的时候请附上优美的中文译文，
因为不是在国外长大或是读英文专业的人很难明白英文的神韵呢。 [M11]

zhms

斗膽翻譯， 小安GG指正。呵呵。


永恒之路

日復一日，生命就這麽毫無意義，
我夢，我思，卻沒有快樂，
幻想依舊存在，
但僅僅是孕育中的思想，
現實沖淡我的存在。
睜着雙眼做我的夢，
我是主角，卻沒有故事。
我逃，我奔，我回望，
最後卻縂停留在起點。
永恒的循環之輪！
難道我真的已生？

香草山

[M29] [M29] [M29]

香草山

很有文采

小生佩服

Jing

这下子对zhms佩服得很啊，送小安同学和zhms各一束鲜花，继续，继续。。。 [M29] [M29]

小安

QUOTE Created By zhms At 2006-4-8
斗膽翻譯， 小安GG指正。呵呵。


永恒之路

日復一日，生命就這麽毫無意義，
我夢，我思，卻沒有快樂，
幻想依舊存在，
但僅僅是孕育中的思想，
現實沖淡我的存在。
睜着雙眼做我的夢，
我是主角，卻沒有故事。
我逃，我奔，我回望，
最後卻縂停留在起點。
永恒的循環之輪！
難道我真的已生？

[M21] 有这样的翻译, 我不敢自己翻译了.

小安

QUOTE Created By Jing At 2006-4-9
这下子对zhrm佩服得很啊，送小安同学和zhrm各一束鲜花，继续，继续。。。 [M29] [M29]

那就有jing你来定主题, 我来试写.或者看看大家有什么建议.

Jing

QUOTE Created By 小安 At 2006-4-10
[quote]QUOTE Created By Jing At 2006-4-9
这下子对zhrm佩服得很啊，送小安同学和zhrm各一束鲜花，继续，继续。。。 [M29] [M29]

那就有jing你来定主题, 我来试写.或者看看大家有什么建议.[/quote]

哇，荣幸呢。

其实我小时候看到大雪的情况也不少，可是近几年的雪几乎没有看到，很怀念雪中的喜悦之情，我想你能够写个下雪给你惊喜的感觉的诗文吗？ [M24]

小安

OF LOVE AND SNOW

I remember the first time I saw snow.
I looked outside my bedroom window and saw the once lively green grass now covered with a layer of white snow.
It looked as though someone had ripped open thousands of pillows and the cotton just flew all over my front yard.
The whole scenery turned into a blurry old black and white photo. The stone black branches contrasting against the pearl white snow.
I rushed to put my jacket on and ran outside.
I put out my hand; a snow flake fell right into my palms.
I could see the intricate stellar shape of the flakes, but, in an instant it melted in my warm hands.
I tried once more to palm another, yet the crystalline star just melted as well.
I went in to put on my gloves and headed out to catch a few more.
Hoping I could get a closer look before it melted away.
This time the snow flaked lived longer.
I could see the tree-like branches that they formed.
It was amazing to see that each one was so unique from the other.
I went on my quest to see if I could see them for longer.
I took of my gloves off and dug into the icy snow.
Just at the exact moment I took out my hands, the most beautiful of flakes landed on my palm.
It looked as though the northern star had fallen from the sky into my palms.
As the wind blew, it danced in my palm, as though walking and floating, at the same time, its crystal shape glittered while it danced away.
The wind grew stronger, for a moment I wanted to close my hands to hold on to the snowflake, but I knew if I did, it would melt away just like the others.
It danced as though enjoying the stage I had made.
The wind came once again, this time it gave no mercy and blew it away.
I watched as it slid from my hands, it lifted into the air and glided for a while, gently falling into the blanket made from billions of unique snow flakes.

安 静

QUOTE Created By zhms At 2006-4-8
斗膽翻譯， 小安GG指正。呵呵。


永恒之路

日復一日，生命就這麽毫無意義，
我夢，我思，卻沒有快樂，
幻想依舊存在，
但僅僅是孕育中的思想，
現實沖淡我的存在。
睜着雙眼做我的夢，
我是主角，卻沒有故事。
我逃，我奔，我回望，
最後卻縂停留在起點。
永恒的循環之輪！
難道我真的已生？

翻译出来都很美。 [M21]

Jing

QUOTE Created By 小安 At 2006-4-10
OF LOVE AND SNOW

I remember the first time I saw snow.
I looked outside my bedroom window and saw the once lively green grass now covered with a layer of white snow.
It looked as though someone had ripped open thousands of pillows and the cotton just flew all over my front yard.
The whole scenery turned into a blurry old black and white photo. The stone black branches contrasting against the pearl white snow.
I rushed to put my jacket on and ran outside.
I put out my hand; a snow flake fell right into my palms.
I could see the intricate stellar shape of the flakes, but, in an instant it melted in my warm hands.
I tried once more to palm another, yet the crystalline star just melted as well.
I went in to put on my gloves and headed out to catch a few more.
Hoping I could get a closer look before it melted away.
This time the snow flaked lived longer.
I could see the tree-like branches that they formed.
It was amazing to see that each one was so unique from the other.
I went on my quest to see if I could see them for longer.
I took of my gloves off and dug into the icy snow.
Just at the exact moment I took out my hands, the most beautiful of flakes landed on my palm.
It looked as though the northern star had fallen from the sky into my palms.
As the wind blew, it danced in my palm, as though walking and floating, at the same time, its crystal shape glittered while it danced away.
The wind grew stronger, for a moment I wanted to close my hands to hold on to the snowflake, but I knew if I did, it would melt away just like the others.
It danced as though enjoying the stage I had made.
The wind came once again, this time it gave no mercy and blew it away.
I watched as it slid from my hands, it lifted into the air and glided for a while, gently falling into the blanket made from billions of unique snow flakes.

这么快啊。。。 [M42] [M42]

Jing

是叙述，不是诗。。。 [M05]