[原创]（俱乐部简介英文版，请大家帮忙修改！谢谢！）

john

[微笑][微笑]I think the introdution about the DREAM ENGLISH CLUB should has a english version. So i have a try. I know there are many mistakes in it. Please give me your good suggestion. Thanks a lot!

WELCOME TO THE DREAM ENGLISH CLUB
1. Brief introduction of the Dream English Club:
Established on Oct.2003 in JunJing Garden, is a non-commercial cultural club. Most of the regular members aged between 20 and 35 years old. The participants with different English level also could communicate freely and happily at all. The activities were so wonderful that the members all agreed to go continuously. Now the club is attractive to more and more fans and members, and developing to be an landscape among some cultural clubs in JunJing Garden!
2. Club member:
No charge for applying for a member of the Dream English Club. You just needed to fill in and paste a portrait in the member card. The members should obey the regulations and take the member card attending the activity every time. The information about the activities will be informed to the members regularly.
3. Chairman:
Chairman: LILI WANG, Mobilephone:13503066795
Email:mermaidloving@hotmail.com
Vice-chairman A: L66
Email:wuyp66@163.com
Vice-chairman B: KATHY, Mobilephone:13922402661
Email:duoduoliang@21cn.com
4. Activity time (regular): 8:00PM—10:PM(every Thursday night)
5. Activity place:
Assembled in the central garden beside the JunYi Xuan, block E/F in JunJing Garden.
6. Activities:
The English corner on every Thursday night is a regular activity of the Dream English Club that coving the host's speech, topic discussion and games. Every member shall be the host who take charge of the English corner in turn. The responsibility of the host on duty is to organize the other members, make the opening speech, announce the regulations and topic, and then write a report involving in the time, place, persons and the other information about the course of activities to email the chairman.
7. Information:
The BBS of 骏景大学堂on WWW.JUNJING.NET is the platform for communication. The information about the club and it's activities are showed on this BBS.
8. Participants:
It is no matter where you live in JunJing Garden or not, what do you do, how old you are and how your English level is. You are warmly welcomed if you are a fan of learning English.


WARMLY WELCOMED TO JOIN US AND SUPPORT US!
LET'S DO IT BETTER TOGETTER!

Written by john liang
2003-12-10


该帖由: li li wang修改，时间 2003-12-11 下午12:47

Freer

Wow! John! Your translation is very perfect! To be frank, I couldn't find any mistake. Maybe some other person can try to do that.


BTW: I didn't understand clearly the word" coving" mean which in"......that [red]coving[/red] the host's speech,......" or perhaps it must be "covering"?

john

最初由Freer发表
Wow! John! Your translation is very perfect! To be frank, I couldn't find any mistake. Maybe some o...

Thangs for your suggestion. I am also not sure which one is better.

L66

1. Brief introduction of the Dream English Club:
Established on Oct.2003 in [red]Galopade Park[/red][blue](not sure if spell correctly---L66)[/blue], is a non-commercial cultural club. Most of the regular members [red]are[/red] between 20 and 35 years old. The participants with different English level[red]s[/red] also could communicate freely and happily. The activities were so wonderful that the members all agreed to go continuously. Now the club is attractive to more and more fans and members, and [red]become[/red] [red]a[/red] landscape among some cultural clubs in [red]Galopade Park[/red]!
2. Club member:
[red]Free of[/red] charge to apply for member[red]ship[/red] of the Dream English Club. You just [red]need[/red] to fill in and paste a portrait in the member card. The members should obey the regulations and take the member card [red]when[/red] attending the activity every time. The information about the activities will be [red]published[/red] to the members regularly.
3. Chairman:
Chairman: LILI WANG, Mobilephone:13503066795
Email:mermaidloving@hotmail.com
Vice-chairman A: L66
Email:wuyp66@163.com
Vice-chairman B: KATHY, Mobilephone:13922402661
Email:duoduoliang@21cn.com
4. Activity time (regular): 8:00PM—10:00PM(every Thursday night)
5. Activity place[red](changed from this week):[/red]
[red]Dancing room in the 2nd floor of North Clubhouse.[/red]
6. Activities:
The English corner on every Thursday night is a regular activity of the Dream English Club [red]which[/red] cov[red]er[/red]ing host's speech, topic discussion and games. Every member shall be the host [red]to organize[/red] the English corner in turn. The responsibility of the host on duty is to organize the other members, make the opening speech, announce the regulations and topics, and write a report [red]afterwards including[/red] the time, place, persons and the other information about the course of activities [red]on the BBS and email to[/red] the chairman.
7. Information:
The BBS of 骏景大学堂on WWW.JUNJING.NET is the platform for communication. The information about the club and [red]its[/red] activities are showed on this BBS.
8. Participants:
It [red]doesn't matter whether[/red] you live in JunJing Garden or not, what you do, how old you are and how your English level is. You are warmly welcomed if you are [red]interested in[/red] English.


WARMLY WELCOMED TO JOIN US AND SUPPORT US!
LET'S DO IT BETTER TOGETTER!


[blue]Thanks to john for the translation! I've made some modifications according to my understanding, and I am not sure if they are correct. Please post your opinions freely![/blue]

[B]Let's do it better together![/B]

该帖由: L66修改，时间 2003-12-17 上午11:34